* doc/apt-cdrom.8.xml:

[apt.git] / doc / apt-cdrom.8.xml

diff --git a/doc/apt-cdrom.8.xml b/doc/apt-cdrom.8.xml
index dee42c1b185b55437fdbf0ee7b2b401ba6bff73b..6030721e740468bf9f02f4d78367e5cfd0ec5971 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/apt-cdrom.8.xml
+++ b/doc/apt-cdrom.8.xml
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8" standalone="no"?>
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8" standalone="no"?>

-<!DOCTYPE refentry PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.2//EN"
-  "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.2/docbookx.dtd" [
+<!DOCTYPE refentry PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN"
+  "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [

 
 <!ENTITY % aptent SYSTEM "apt.ent">
 %aptent;
 
 <!ENTITY % aptent SYSTEM "apt.ent">
 %aptent;


@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@
  <!-- Man page title -->
  <refnamediv>
     <refname>apt-cdrom</refname>
  <!-- Man page title -->
  <refnamediv>
     <refname>apt-cdrom</refname>

-    <refpurpose>APT CDROM management utility</refpurpose>
+    <refpurpose>APT CD-ROM management utility</refpurpose>

  </refnamediv>
 
  &synopsis-command-apt-cdrom;
 
  <refsect1><title>Description</title>
  </refnamediv>
 
  &synopsis-command-apt-cdrom;
 
  <refsect1><title>Description</title>

-   <para><command>apt-cdrom</command> is used to add a new CDROM to APTs list
+   <para><command>apt-cdrom</command> is used to add a new CD-ROM to APT's list

     of available sources. <command>apt-cdrom</command> takes care of
    determining the structure of
    the disc as well as correcting for several possible mis-burns and 
     of available sources. <command>apt-cdrom</command> takes care of
    determining the structure of
    the disc as well as correcting for several possible mis-burns and 


@@ -43,8 +43,8 @@
    </para>
 
    <para>It is necessary to use <command>apt-cdrom</command> to add CDs to the
    </para>
 
    <para>It is necessary to use <command>apt-cdrom</command> to add CDs to the

-   APT system, 
-   it cannot be done by hand. Furthermore each disk in a multi-cd set must be
+   APT system;
+   it cannot be done by hand. Furthermore each disc in a multi-CD set must be

    inserted and scanned separately to account for possible mis-burns.
    </para>
 
    inserted and scanned separately to account for possible mis-burns.
    </para>
 


@@ -55,13 +55,13 @@
      <varlistentry><term><option>add</option></term>
      <listitem><para><literal>add</literal> is used to add a new disc to the
      source list. It will unmount the
      <varlistentry><term><option>add</option></term>
      <listitem><para><literal>add</literal> is used to add a new disc to the
      source list. It will unmount the

-     CDROM device, prompt for a disk to be inserted and then proceed to 
+     CD-ROM device, prompt for a disc to be inserted and then proceed to 

      scan it and copy the index files. If the disc does not have a proper
      scan it and copy the index files. If the disc does not have a proper

-     <filename>disk</filename> directory you will be prompted for a descriptive 
+     <filename>.disk</filename> directory you will be prompted for a descriptive 

      title.
      </para>
 
      title.
      </para>
 

-     <para>APT uses a CDROM ID to track which disc is currently in the drive and
+     <para>APT uses a CD-ROM ID to track which disc is currently in the drive and

      maintains a database of these IDs in 
      <filename>&statedir;/cdroms.list</filename>
      </para>
      maintains a database of these IDs in 
      <filename>&statedir;/cdroms.list</filename>
      </para>


@@ -91,8 +91,8 @@
      </varlistentry>
      
      <varlistentry><term><option>-r</option></term><term><option>--rename</option></term>
      </varlistentry>
      
      <varlistentry><term><option>-r</option></term><term><option>--rename</option></term>

-     <listitem><para>Rename a disc; change the label of a disk or override the
-      disks given label. This option will cause <command>apt-cdrom</command> to
+     <listitem><para>Rename a disc; change the label of a disc or override the
+      disc's given label. This option will cause <command>apt-cdrom</command> to

       prompt for a new label.
      Configuration Item: <literal>APT::CDROM::Rename</literal>.
      </para>
       prompt for a new label.
      Configuration Item: <literal>APT::CDROM::Rename</literal>.
      </para>