From: Justin B Rye <justin.byam.rye@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 22 Nov 2015 10:05:45 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: review apt-mark(8) manpage
X-Git-Tag: 1.1~11
X-Git-Url: https://git.saurik.com/apt.git/commitdiff_plain/c4bfbe0dbcd333930abd46ac4572d87a0658fd45?hp=d072150a46e9af4a972bf4229c76e648e5201fc0

review apt-mark(8) manpage
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diff --git a/doc/apt-mark.8.xml b/doc/apt-mark.8.xml
index f9ca6553e..ddde0416f 100644
--- a/doc/apt-mark.8.xml
+++ b/doc/apt-mark.8.xml
@@ -32,19 +32,19 @@
  &synopsis-command-apt-mark;
 
  <refsect1><title>Description</title>
-    <para><command>apt-mark</command> can be used as a unified frontend to set
-       various settings for a package like marking a package as being
+    <para><command>apt-mark</command> can be used as a unified front-end to set
+       various settings for a package, such as marking a package as being
        automatically/manually installed or changing <command>dpkg</command>
        selections such as hold, install, deinstall and purge which are respected
        e.g. by <command>apt-get dselect-upgrade</command> or <command>aptitude</command>.
    </para>
- </refsect1><refsect1><title>Automatically and manually installed packages</title>
+   </refsect1><refsect1><title>Automatically and Manually Installed Packages</title>
    <para>
      When you request that a package is installed, and as a result
      other packages are installed to satisfy its dependencies, the
-     dependencies are marked as being automatically installed, while
+     dependencies are marked as being automatically installed, while the
      package you installed explicitly is marked as manually installed.
-     Once a automatically installed package is no longer depended on
+     Once an automatically installed package is no longer depended on
      by any manually installed package it is considered no longer needed
      and e.g. <command>apt-get</command> or <command>aptitude</command>
      will at least suggest removing them.
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
      </variablelist>
    </refsect2>
 
- </refsect1><refsect1><title>Prevent changes for a package</title>
+ </refsect1><refsect1><title>Prevent Changes for a Package</title>
    <variablelist>
      <varlistentry><term><option>hold</option></term>
 	 <listitem><para><literal>hold</literal> is used to mark a
@@ -118,11 +118,11 @@
        </para></listitem>
      </varlistentry>
    </variablelist>
- </refsect1><refsect1><title>Shedule packages for install, remove and purge</title>
+ </refsect1><refsect1><title>Schedule Packages for Install, Remove and Purge</title>
  <para>
-    Some frontends like <command>apt-get dselect-upgrade</command> can be used to
-    apply previously sheduled changes to the install state of packages. Such changes
-    can be sheduled with the <option>install</option>, <option>remove</option>
+    Some front-ends like <command>apt-get dselect-upgrade</command> can be used to
+    apply previously scheduled changes to the install state of packages. Such changes
+    can be scheduled with the <option>install</option>, <option>remove</option>
     (also known as <option>deinstall</option>) and <option>purge</option> commands.
     Packages with a specific selection can be displayed with <option>showinstall</option>,
     <option>showremove</option> and <option>showpurge</option> respectively.